Wednesday, September 22, 2010
discrapitive essay
A lost child in a weird cafe shop.In the center , you can see two men and one child. One of the men was a police officer and the other is the waiter. At the bottom of the child's chair, you can see a red bag with a stick. Behind the waiters, you can see the special board for the orders. On the left side of the special board , you can see an old radio. Next to the radio , you can see a cabinet with a lot of pie inside it. the bar's chair's were colored in green. Finally, the child were out of the house and he wanted to go far from his home, and the police officer got him back.
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from Linda Wesley:
ReplyDeleteI'm curious...WHy do you think the child wanted to be so far from home?
Nice! I can draw a similar picture by that description
ReplyDeleteHi, Musaed.
ReplyDeleteWhat is the cabinet painted? :-)
Good description. when the police man got him back Did the boy want to go back to home??
ReplyDeletenice description!
ReplyDeleteNice job!! :)
ReplyDeleteI can think about the picture when I read your paragraph.
Muased, its nive but you have some fregman
ReplyDeleteoh!I almost chose this picture
ReplyDeletenice job Musaed!
I like first and last sentences! Nice story!!:D
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