Wednesday, September 22, 2010

discrapitive essay

A lost child in a weird cafe shop.In the center , you can see two men and one child. One of the men was a police officer and the other is the waiter. At the bottom of the child's chair, you can see a red bag with a stick. Behind the waiters, you can see the special board  for the orders. On the left side of the special board , you can see an old radio. Next to the radio , you can see a cabinet with a lot of pie inside it. the bar's chair's were colored in green. Finally, the child were out of the house and he wanted to go far from his home, and the police officer got him back.

9 comments:

  1. from Linda Wesley:

    I'm curious...WHy do you think the child wanted to be so far from home?

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  2. Nice! I can draw a similar picture by that description

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  3. Hi, Musaed.
    What is the cabinet painted? :-)

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  4. Good description. when the police man got him back Did the boy want to go back to home??

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  5. Nice job!! :)
    I can think about the picture when I read your paragraph.

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  6. Muased, its nive but you have some fregman

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  7. oh!I almost chose this picture
    nice job Musaed!

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  8. I like first and last sentences! Nice story!!:D

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